I chose to re-read the chapter “As a Result”, chapter 8. I wanted to make sure that I had just the right amount of transitions in my essay and there weren’t too many pointing terms and if there were to make sure it was clear what I was talking about. Also, if there was any … [Read more…]
When I brainstorm I usually write down quotes from each essay I feel like could work and then build off of that when I write my essay.
Many people believe that art can help increase our knowledge of the world through science. However, does the evidence I’ve cited prove conclusively that science NEEDS art to move forward in the future? Some scientists might not even need art to conclude their findings. Also, physicists and neuroscientists can soon have different techniques to find … [Read more…]
TREAC: Art can encourage viewing things from different points of views which can help in building our empathetic thinking. Arts likelihood to place people in other peoples shoes can provide a deeper understanding of others which helps us to imagine new things. In the article “Necessary Edges: Arts, Empathy, and Education” Yo-Yo Ma states, “Empathy … [Read more…]
I feel like my annotations are getting better and better each time I annotate a text. I connect with the text on the paper and explain things on the paper in my own words. It was first published on WorldPost, an online news and blog site in January 2014. Yo-Yo Ma wrote the essay and … [Read more…]
One part in Beck’s article that caught my eye was when she was talking about how “in order to have relationships, we’ve all had to tell little pieces of our story.” That never has occurred to me, every person in my life right now knows bits and pieces of my life story and some know … [Read more…]
The rubric helped me make sure my essay was written the way it should be. After reading the rubric and seeing that if I re-read my paper out loud it would help me find more mistakes and where I need to elaborate, and it did just that. Also in the rubric where it asked if … [Read more…]
Comparing my experience writing my first draft of an essay to Lamott’s was similar in some ways. I always panic right before writing it because I have no idea if it will be good or not but then I usually just tell myself that it’s only the first draft and it doesn’t have to be … [Read more…]
