blog 19

I chose to re-read the chapter “As a Result”, chapter 8. I wanted to make sure that I had just the right amount of transitions in my essay and there weren’t too many pointing terms and if there were to make sure it was clear what I was talking about. Also, if there was any repetition, was it necessary or unnecessary? Rereading this chapter helped me add in words/phrases and take out words/phrases in my essay. This is a good chapter to make sure your writing flows and doesn’t seem too choppy, repetitive, or confusing. This chapter is about how to use transitions, pointing words, key terms and phrases, and repetition correctly.